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I've never been the patient kind
I've never been the one to sit
    Legs crossed
    Hands folded
    Eyes closed
    Head down
    Mind blank
No, I'm the greedy child
I'm the one who feeds
   on instant gratification
Whose mind is always moving
   always curious
I've never been the patient one
I've never taken kindly to hinted surprises
I'm the one who checks the clock
    (It's eight)
  Swears not to look again but..
Checks the clock
    (Still eight)
I'm the one who sits
     Legs twitching
     Hands moving
     Eyes open
     Mind crowded
And sneaks another glance at the clock
     (Still eight)
I've always been the one
  To drum my fingers
    To twitch
     To tap
I've never been one to believe
The constant
   Tic, tic, tic
Of the second hand
When years pass between minutes
I've always been the one
Who paces
Back
   And forth
     And back
Who checks the clock obsessively
  And...
:iconmyownformoftherapy:

Author's Comments

...it's eight-o-one


:P for a poetry duel thingy mah whuutsit

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:iconkiltul:
Oh, you totally win...yours is so much more true to the topic than mine is...

AND you're poem is much more amazing than mine anyway

--
Snails see the benefits,
The beauty in every inch.
:icondarkicekitsune:
*laughs* oh very nice...
this makes me think of our conversations...
the conversations of which one of us is a better worrier
"O_O what if...they're in a ditch...and a murdering rapist just escaped from jail...D8 and their car broke down...and the murder-rapist pulled them from the car and dragged them deep into the forest...DDDD8 what if they're dying as we speak??? drowning in a puddle of their own blood??? asking for us??? T_T but we can't here them cuz we're here, staring at the damn clock, going "D8 why aren't they here yet???" "

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The day I see you do that is the day that I become a hooker :P
So don't ever do it, lest you want a hooker best friend.~Dark to Muddy
:iconmymuddyjeans:
O.O YES!

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Mr. :nod: is my friend, aren't you? :nod: Do you like chocolate? :nod: See, we have so much in common Mr. :nod: and I. No, I'm not crazy, am I, Mr. :nod:? :nod: NO I'M NOT!!! DON'T LISTEN TO HIM, HE LIES!!! :nod: See, even Mr. :nod: says so.
:iconmymuddyjeans:
XD You worrywort.

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Mr. :nod: is my friend, aren't you? :nod: Do you like chocolate? :nod: See, we have so much in common Mr. :nod: and I. No, I'm not crazy, am I, Mr. :nod:? :nod: NO I'M NOT!!! DON'T LISTEN TO HIM, HE LIES!!! :nod: See, even Mr. :nod: says so.
:icondarkicekitsune:
thaaaaaaaat's meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 8D

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The day I see you do that is the day that I become a hooker :P
So don't ever do it, lest you want a hooker best friend.~Dark to Muddy
:iconxxwreckoningxx:
Unbelievably good. If this doesn't win, well...I'm not entirely sure what will happen, but it won't be good!

--
“Those who dance are considered insane by those who can’t hear the music.”—George Carlin

#artistic-advancement~~ProjectImprove~=RawEm0tion
~#Project-Pay-Forward~#DeviouslyInspired
:iconhikaritheninja:
Waiting suuuuuuuuuucks... beautiful poem!

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You're not going to kill them. They're already dead. You can't make them deader. Dead isn't a degree. You can't be dead, deader, deadest- Tod
~
Maybe he should sit behind his desk with a sniper rifle- Chibi
Kelly with a sniper rifle? I'm scared- Hikari
:iconmyownformoftherapy:
:P ~Kiltul said I win
yay me xD

:3 thanks a bunch

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"Haha! NO TEETH! Who can bench press a llama now? I CAN!" -Hakita


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