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I want to call you North
So when the wind blows my way
And the storms come in
I have someone to blame

I want to call you Orange
So when I write a poem about you
And the rhythm doesn't work
I'll have an excuse not to rhyme

I want to call you TwentyFour
So when the days get too long
And the minutes stretch on
I can count off the hours 'til you

I want to call you MyDog
So when I say ‘he’s missing’
And put up wanted posters
People will think I’m still sane

I want to call you Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
So that when I'm feeling lonely
And I've no one left to talk to
I can let your syllables fill up the room

I want to call you Sunshine
So when the rain comes pouring in
And the streets begin to flood
I won't be the only one waiting for you

I want to call you Boyfriend
So when conversations turn strange
And I can't stop repeating your name
They'll think that I'm in love and not just unhinged

I just want to call you
So I can hear your voice again
:iconmyownformoftherapy:

Author's Comments

*DarkIceKitsune and i made this loveliness 8D

^^

:) oh i love critique

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:icondarkicekitsune:
XD we is cool and fave our own collabed poems

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She always gets really annoyed when she can't fit in my pants.~Dark, about her cousin
If I were you, I'd make her feel bad about it. "Dammit, why are you so skinny?" "D8< What, are you calling me anorexic now?! Bitch! WTF!? I am not anorexic!"~Abel
:iconfreakomaniacadisical:
Nice :)
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:iconart3ry:
Wow. I think I'm in love with your poem.
I especially enjoyed reading the second verse.
This kicks the arse of many other poems I've read.
Nice work.
:iconx-mirror-memories-x:
awww! I luuurve it!
:3
the best poem I've read yet
seriously o-o

I love the supercallafragalisticexpialodocious part, really lovely. :D

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"Perhaps when we cry for no reason, or cry with happiness, it's because we're really crying for lost childhoods; the ones that we left behind."
"Perhaps."
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"To live would be an awfully great adventure."
:icononnanekoyasha:
Amazing.. I love the pattern you guys used... Haha, I wish I was friggin' creative like that!
Love it :)

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*Must...resist...emo...comments....*
:iconkiltul:
i should've read it when you wrote it...

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Snails see the benefits,
The beauty in every inch.
:iconpophipi:
ooo I love all the imagery that your poem gives! Its a great idea too. Great job!

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If you're reading this message, I bet you that you spend a lot of your time staring at glowing rectangles. ;)
:iconkiltul:
...because every time I look at it, I know I'm meant for you, and you are meant for me

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Snails see the benefits,
The beauty in every inch.
:iconsisterjanet:
I've been feeling like this a lot lately. Well done poem.

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